This is one of those stories that a experienced reader can tell the author put their heart into. While the length of the chapters are on the short side i will say that each chapter carries its own personality. There were one or 2 errors I noticed while reading but it's not the big of a deal, I just tend to over edit my own work, so i tend to pay attention to the placement of every punctuation mark etc. etc. I would like to say this story has some potential down the line as it progresses. Keep up the work Author (^_-)b\

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If you love action then you'll love this. It begins with a load of action. As for the pacing, mostimes it can be fastpaced but it is also slowpaced at some scenes. Honestly an still not sure who the main character is since it wasn't introduced in the synopsis. Am thinking it's either our brave young hero or it's our masked one. somethings seem a bit confusing but am sure our beloved authorsan will explain them soon. And just like he has said he's improving so am expecting great things from this novel.

Honest Review: The Novel is quite engaging and very enjoyable. It has some grammatical mistakes, though, which could be fixed. Overall, it's a great novel, and I feel like as the author writes more and improves, it could indeed reach its potential. I say you should give it a shot.

I just want to tell who ever read it the story writing in the few chapters might not be that good but after chapter eight it has improve a lot and will be keep improving in the future chapters. I'm a non English speaking person so please bare with me for just a few chapters

I'm going to leave an honest review now. I must say, this is a rather interesting story. Although I have a few complaints such as grammatical errors here and there. Then there is also the problem about the spacing. Please don't join your words together. It makes it hard for the readers to read. Make use of paragraphs when a character wants to say something. Apart from that, I think the story is okay. Continue writing this story, Author. And may the story bless you.

Nice book, Nice characters. A great story overall

Pretty good, just that there are errors you need to fix here and there. Keep up the good work

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I really like this story. The world setting is quite interesting, and the story seems pretty reliable so far. I like this type of story, so i might as well stick to it till the end. The only thing is that the character introduction is a bit lost (tell me if i'm wrong). overall, it's perfect 👌.