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TimEaterOfWorlds
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2024-07-04 04:07

A well written story with an interesting set of characters, plot and world background. The development of a banking family in India during such an interesting period may be a niche novel, but one with a lot of promise in development. I’m a big fan of business novels and the author does a good job of ensuring everything makes sense, in addition to balancing the development. The biggest issue would be the update stability, as it’s not on a real schedule, I would recommend the author to try and update on a schedule, such as every second or third day. The Indian locations, names and customs can be a bit challenging for those unfamiliar with it but the author does a good job of simplifying it. Hope the author continues to update as It’s a very interesting novel

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