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Review Detail of hakuyoku in DXD Issei: The Mind of Games

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if any of you are tired with trash dxd fanfics this is for you it truly paints issei as human not just a boobs obsessed perverts he actually have souls can breakdown have trauma and most importantly his deepest desire have nothing to do with getting as many girls as possible like any dxd fanfics the writing quality could be improved as there is some grammatical error here and there but for the most it is a very good story now for the author if you are reading this i guess the story will go to harem route because of how rias behave please don't do the harem route because it will ruin issei character as he who was healed by artemis doesn't need to to chase skirt imo one girl is enough most fanfics focus to much on this aspects so please caution if you truly wish for a harem route no mater what please make it so issei have at least a resistance to the idea as his current mental state shouldn't allow him to have another woman just because he can he should be full with artemis right now that was all an overall great story and great use of the red dragon gauntlet as to not make it overpowered looking forward to your cooking

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