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Yusuf_Sumba
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2024-12-02 08:28

the inconsistencies in the novel make me think either the author isn't serious about this or he has dementia.coz there's no way someone can write something this terrible and upload it with no shame.a lot of room for improvement .also too cliche like the plot just makes you irritated sometimes.something i can recommend to my worst enemy.but since I've got nothing better to do I'll continue torturing myself with this,i doubt it could get any worse than it already is.grammar is not that bad though when compared to other chinese trash,so that's a positive.

The Shelter Game: Me, Starting with a Tenfold Drop Rate

BigWhiteGoose
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Hi everyone, I'm the author BigWhiteGoose, and I want to thank you all for checking out my novel! I'm thrilled to be able to serialize my work on Webnovel. This is a novel that combines elements of apocalypse, fantasy, system, and harem genres. I hope you all will like it! Also, I'd appreciate it if you could leave a five-star rating, thank you everyone!

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Muy buen libro, me encantó.[img=coins][img=coins]

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Where can i read this like raw or smthng that doesn’t require to top upp??? Thankss

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the writing is so bad... I thought it was a translation😔

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MY LORD BIGWHITEGOOSE PLEASE FASTER UPDATE FOR THE PLUNDER BOOK I BADLY WANT TO READ IT PLEASE 😢😢😢 I WILL READ THIS BOOK FOR THE MEAN TIME WHILE WAITING ON MORE UPDATES ON THE OTHER. MASS RELEASE PLEASE! 🥺

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This novel is very interesting and allows me to settle down and read it. The plot is well-designed, and overall, it’s a good book worth reading.

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I've been looking for a good book to read for a while now, and I really hope i don't continue my search after reading this one. On that note, if you're a fan of an erotic, succubus, supernatural themed story, then 'My journey with a succubus' is definitely a book you should read. Go ahead and try it, you'll love it.

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