Mediocre. Nothing exciting, nothing special, nothing new. The mc isn't anything special character wise. A lot could be expanded upon. We don't know the relationship between the mc and the surrounding characters. The mc doesn't act like he is really older mentally than he is physically. He says things to Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura more for them to like him better in the short term to finish his quest than to show his own personality. He simply asks Sasuke to train together with him and he says yes. No reasoning given beyond wanting to kill Itachi but doesn't explain why he would train with HIM as he Sasuke is closed off and arrogant. Is he stronger than Sasuke? We don't know. How strong is he? We don't know beyond some numbers on his status. I could continue with more, but in short the story feels lazy and mediocre.

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