Review Detail of Nick_King_1375 in Welcome to the University of Unseen Rivalries 2024

Item: Welcome to the University of Unseen Rivalries 2024
Rating: 3.8

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Nick_King_1375Lv141mthNick_King_1375

the only way I see this not being good is the absolute rush, if it was spread out a bit more and give more depth then this could be 5 stars. it has a good foundation and a good framework it just needs some patching up.

Welcome to the University of Unseen Rivalries 2024

ZERO8

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ZERO8AuthorZERO8

I have rewritten everything new in more depth and better, so try reading it from the beginning and then tell me your opinion. Furthermore, indeed it was written hastily just as base prototype. Thanks for your comment and reading. I will wait for your next review.

1mth