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2024-05-17 22:17

It's good so far ................................................................................................................................

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HornyFBI
HornyFBIAuthor

Thanks for the stars!

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Shireneko
ShirenekoLv14

One of the best Harry Potter fanfics that I have read and I have read way too many of them! Writing Quality (5/5) - I have nothing to say about the quality, if there were some errors I didn’t notice them due to how great the story is. Updating Stability (5/5) - I have binge read everything so I can’t tell however, it seems to be seven per week or once a day so I have nothing to say about it! Story Development (5/5) - Well, I won’t spoil you guys but give it a couple of chapters and you win’t regret it. Following the MC, the author has followed a clear path and willingly or not, the development of the story has no problem at all! Character Design (5/5) - Took Salazar Slytherin as the MC and developed it in ways I couldn’t have expected. As we all know little about the character itself, everything’s pretty AU but as the subject of Salazar Slytherin reappears across the story, we see another version of the founder of the Slytherin house. We see a perspective from the founder himself instead of history and the words of other wizards. Truly well developed and I can’t wait to see how he develops his relationships! World Design (5/5) - Took the world of Harry Potter and added his own twist to it, creatures that didn’t originally appear in the original harry potter series but could have appeared back in the founder’s times, all kinds of magic, organization, honestly, the world as developed beyond Hogwarts itself and I saw no loopholes. Note for the author - Honestly I love your work and would love to see a lot more. There is so much potential to still develop in this world and I have no regret having started it, my only regret is having started it too early and not having enough chapters to read. However, I love your work and I can’t wait for more! Thanks for the chapters and the fanfic!

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