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Blood_soaked_barLv1125d
2024-12-09 11:34

This is my review4/5/1/1/5: first-the writing quality is good there is only some small problem here and there for example, sometimes the status window have some confusion and (s,ss,sss,ssss,sssss) etc ,not worth mentioning. Second-A very good update stability. third-the beginning of the problem the novel is fast and I’m not speaking about the the chapter being rushed I’m speaking about the protagonist climbing the tower I start to notice that the author starts skipping some of the tower floors with some brief explanation just so he can jump to the war what I mean you only have 100 floors make it worth it -2 the journey of a protagonist is way too easy he goes inside the tower floor use thunderclap and go to the next floor. I can understand that he is supposed to be a supreme being seed but this is way too easy and that makes the novel boring-3 the class system sorry to say this but this is absolutely garbage if you going to put a traditional class structure at least follow it instead of using a staff like a club and after a while a hammer if you are not going to follow the system of class, then why put it there and I hate mixing classes . fourth- the protagonist character was good at the start however after reaching the camp it started to go downhill the protagonist become standard Chinese protagonist /cowardly /childish /rash/drama queen/stupid I have to admit he sometimes become a mature and wise only happen in a brief moment and he go back to become a standard Chinese protagonist this is clearly not a Chinese novel that what’s make me more annoyed because this could be so much better. fifth- a standard world standard element /towers /Demon invasion /and the climb to godhood but it was mixed in very good way. and finally, the novel is good overall however the character of the protagonist and his own development is frustrating and annoying to read the other character in general are well done you can go read it. Don’t take my opinion. 100%. Each person has his own taste especially in the section of the character design what I see as a childish rush and stupid etc and other people opinion might become humorous funny and smart. Try it you might like it. That’s all from me.

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This is outside the review. Why do I feel that the protagonist potential is worse than the other supremes being? I mean one controls dream nightmares and mental attack in general the other is literally a reality manipulator and the third is a sword master and we come to the protagonist the jack of all trade master of none and the magic itself feels very constricted or nerve in term of potential since my own version of magic usually align with Harry Potter version of Magic I feel the magic in the story is very very constrictev. You only have element and you have to follow through with it. It doesn’t feel like magic. It feel more like you have a superpower of the chosen element.

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