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2024-10-21 22:16

This novel is good, however the author seemed to forget what they were writing at a certain point and replaced characters and their backgrounds, at first Sophie was the MC's sister, then she became an orphan and just a subordinate. There also wasn't much character development for Alex, the fact that she was previously a guy with a family before was completely forgotten and then was said that she's an orphan instead. She also conveniently made incredibly stupid decisions as she got stronger for the sole purpose of pushing the plot forwards. The levelling also made no sense as it was clearly just use to level up characters when the author wanted them to, rather than making any sense in exp gain(which was never even explained properly) Overall, a good premise, however, with poor execution

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