Review Detail of Meta0202 in Fear the Walking Dead: Survive the Zombie Apocalypse
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firstly, the author thought that he was Chinese and poured a lot of unnecessary water in each chapter. by the way, I've only read 3-4 chapters. Secondly, you add unnecessary characters at once. in these 3-4 chapters, I met so many unnecessary people that I would cry in my balcony, but unfortunately I don't have a balcony.Thirdly, I am a person who, when I read, chooses the main characters who say "a woman will only stop my progress" and then we find out that he has a girlfriend. Fourthly, how could he not notice that there are no zombie movies in their world? Is he too dumb? Yes. I also think that the author will try to make unnecessary drama. Oh, he's also so dumb that he didn't even check what his father sent in size 10 GB. he can only be called an ungrateful person if he even forgot about the person who provided for you and who is always on business trips. There are many other things I'm not happy with, but I'm already tired of writing.
Fear the Walking Dead: Survive the Zombie Apocalypse
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I read up to chapter 6 as I thought he was trying to show some small drama. trying to show the main character on the good side. I also think it's that Emma's mother is infected and yes, the author is already trying to make a drama here again. also about my father. is it interesting that every person will react the same way to the fact that HIS FATHER'S LAWYER CALLED THIS PERSON'S SON? No, everyone would start to worry. I sincerely feel sorry for his father. He tried to prepare his son. but his son turned out to be a piece of moron.
What part of the world do you live in? How would you know you were in an alien invasion movie if the main characters in a movie live in a different state than you? Furthermore, the protagonist does review the information that he sends to your father. He prepares, he uses that information to create a super shelter and many months later the apocalypse happens. I believe in the personal thing that showing the wing parts of a character gives much more meaning to making them a better character, believe me, I have made perfect characters.
If you had taken the trouble to read my review or the auxiliary chapter, you would realize that the three chapters that have a prologue title are for one, to explain the origin of the virus, two, to make sense of how the protagonist knows about the virus that ultimately ends up being one he knows and three, to make sense of the protagonist's combat skills. His father is a mercenary who lost his wife, he trains his son since he was a child so that he is not a child who is beaten at school and teaches him to shoot. Believe me, it all makes sense to me, but thank you for taking the trouble to read my novel, I'm sorry for the unpleasant time it took you to get my story.
Meta0202:I read up to chapter 6 as I thought he was trying to show some small drama. trying to show the main character on the good side. I also think it's that Emma's mother is infected and yes, the author is already trying to make a drama here again. also about my father. is it interesting that every person will react the same way to the fact that HIS FATHER'S LAWYER CALLED THIS PERSON'S SON? No, everyone would start to worry. I sincerely feel sorry for his father. He tried to prepare his son. but his son turned out to be a piece of moron.
