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Bro_is_bored
Bro_is_boredLv419dBro_is_bored

untill the chapter 9 ,the grammar is very poor . You need to improve the quality of you novel or use chatgpt

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Fear the Walking Dead: Survive the Zombie Apocalypse

SrCuervo

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Bro_is_bored
Bro_is_boredLv4Bro_is_bored

your writing quality has improved . Thanks for taking the criticism positively and done something about it .👍🏻

SrCuervo
SrCuervoAuthorSrCuervo

Do you recommend any grammatically? Translate by chatgpt, solve grammar problems by quillbot... I thought it wasn't that bad.

UnknownMaster
UnknownMasterLv3UnknownMaster

Using Grammarly makes it feel like AI written, same with all the other AI help. Maybe use wordtune to fix little mistakes here and there. To translate use Yandex.

SrCuervo:Do you recommend any grammatically? Translate by chatgpt, solve grammar problems by quillbot... I thought it wasn't that bad.
Bro_is_bored
Bro_is_boredLv4Bro_is_bored

It is difficult to understand what is going on in the story and very unpleasant to read. You need make story in a flow . Just read any top novel and come back n reads your . You will get what i m saying

SrCuervo:Do you recommend any grammatically? Translate by chatgpt, solve grammar problems by quillbot... I thought it wasn't that bad.
Bro_is_bored
Bro_is_boredLv4Bro_is_bored

I love zombies stories and i hope you will do justice to this genre in this app 🙏🏻😢.

SrCuervo
SrCuervoAuthorSrCuervo

I already know what the error is, that is solved from my draft 42... I will try to translate the previous chapters again to solve it

Bro_is_bored:I love zombies stories and i hope you will do justice to this genre in this app 🙏🏻😢.
SrCuervo
SrCuervoAuthorSrCuervo

Bro_is_bored:I love zombies stories and i hope you will do justice to this genre in this app 🙏🏻😢.