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Na1gel
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i read the first chapter ... the most important chapter of them all you can tell so much about it and what i saw was disgusting , the writing is good i guess but the mc himself just openly screaming at a being " god/rob" how useless and bad god he is its honestly astounding espeachally since said being can just do the thanos snap and ur dead it kinda sums up how low iq and how useless he is, this dude is what the normal readers here vould call a beta i guess and when he is about to be reincarnated the last thing he says is " little hinata wait for me" thats sums up everything you need to know .. i dont care about character progression when the mc is already such a disgusting character in the start , so il just put this out to warn off serious readers that wont want a wannabe chinese fatty loli perv as an protoganist

Naruto: In Pursuit of Happiness

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Eroos
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I think I will do it, but a small one, maybe no more than three people.

Dark_PersonJJ:Do not listen to HATERS, btw what is your decision about giving Naruto harem.?
Eroos
EroosAuthorEroos

This review couldn't be funnier, I won't say anything, I'll just laugh.

Dark_PersonJJ
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Do not listen to HATERS, btw what is your decision about giving Naruto harem.?

Eroos:This review couldn't be funnier, I won't say anything, I'll just laugh.
Na1gel
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you do you ?.. i did not really leave a rew for you its for others so i dont really care lol

Eroos:This review couldn't be funnier, I won't say anything, I'll just laugh.
Dark_PersonJJ
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I propose Hinata,Ino,Sakura since i doubt this Naruto cares about canon and about Sasuke and for Sarada to being born, and Ino relationship with Sai was a big joke of Romance made by Kishimoto.

Eroos:I think I will do it, but a small one, maybe no more than three people.
Dark_PersonJJ
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You can make it max five, Hinata,Sakura,Ino,Tamari,Tenten

Eroos:I think I will do it, but a small one, maybe no more than three people.
KDAfrost
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OMG lol this is hilarious, do you not even read the synopsis or this has to be a joke right?

DaoistaYohan
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Que desperdício irmão, nós já conhecemos essas mulheres! Hinata é uma obrigação, ela vai agregar muito pra história e pro MC no início! Agora as outras duas, seria muito interessante se aparecem bem mais tarde na história, Alguém como a Guren, uma kunoichi incrível com um Limite-de-linhagem ainda mais incrível que nenhuma das fanfics de Naruto abordou ainda! A 3 Mulher... Talvez aquela princesa do filme de Naruto da terra na neve eu acho... Algo que agregue "Realidade" a história e que não seja só "+1Bucet*" Br. 👍

Dark_PersonJJ:You can make it max five, Hinata,Sakura,Ino,Tamari,Tenten
DaoistaYohan
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Concordo totalmente com o número 3! Tem uma fanfic de BNHA magnífica que o mc tinha 3 mulheres, mas ao decorrer da história ele acabou com 1 só, as outras duas, 1 traiu ele e a outra não aguentou o massacre que ele fez pra mudar o mundo e alcançar a paz! Não lembro o nome da Fanfic! Br

Eroos:I think I will do it, but a small one, maybe no more than three people.
Dark_PersonJJ
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english Please.?

DaoistaYohan:Que desperdício irmão, nós já conhecemos essas mulheres! Hinata é uma obrigação, ela vai agregar muito pra história e pro MC no início! Agora as outras duas, seria muito interessante se aparecem bem mais tarde na história, Alguém como a Guren, uma kunoichi incrível com um Limite-de-linhagem ainda mais incrível que nenhuma das fanfics de Naruto abordou ainda! A 3 Mulher... Talvez aquela princesa do filme de Naruto da terra na neve eu acho... Algo que agregue "Realidade" a história e que não seja só "+1Bucet*" Br. 👍