The story is good, wholesome and just nice in general the thing that ruins it is the harem, I have never seen a good harem fic before that gets character interactions right, everyone and there mama is blushing over any nice thing the mc is doing, forced character interactions that are also inconsistent. I like that at least the author keeps the character traits of the og characters for the most part , however Weiss character was gotten wrong, in order to try to put her in the harem you change her personality for the most part, and making Yang that easily bashful is very unlike her. Still its strangely wholesome in some way though. I think the main problem is that 5 girls are wayyy too much, at most 2 woulda been better . I like the solo leveling system that mc has, from what I've seen it seems he isn't going shadow monarch route so its not gonna be some copy paste powers.
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correct! my friend who is the original author for this figured it was too boring to give him a shadow system we made it a light system with the focus being as a paladin summoner using the light of the soul. we think it's pretty good and as the beta reader for this fic... yeah I can't argue that point. and yeah the harem for me was originally 4 to keep it nice and small. and we might have changed Weiss and Yang some but it fit for the story for us. you'll see more of their original personalities come back in later chapters.
