it's very good in these 27 chapters, i can't wait. btw, I saw it from the reddit post. a

I don’t like the MC he is too weak sure he is strong with his jutsu and in battle but he has a weak will. That not it he is also scared to change canon but then he be like F it and changes canon it like come on I smell hypocrisy. Like he needs to change go through some character development or something this is getting boring to read about how much trouble he has with taking a life he is kind hearted.

a story in which the mc follows the whole haku line and doesn't seem to be an older person who knows the story of naruto and is always passive, it's not something for me, but someone might like it

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Giving myself a review. Liking what I wrote so far. the MC personality is not catered to readers who likes typical OP arrogant young master flexing wants to be protagonist of the world kind of MC. Not your typical overpowered MC. not arrogant, does not have sociopathic tendencies, and does not seek attention to be protagonist or become the main lead of the story just because he's reincarnated. Especially because HE KNOWS the world will be peaceful without any of his intervention. He does enjoy feeling powerful but it's not his main priority. I hate to microexplain things that shouldn't have to be explained like I am not going to dive deep into the psychological reasoning on why a character does or doesn't do what they did or haven't done because in my view that's a waste of my time to write something that should have been interpreted by the circumstances. The characters are meant to be human beings.