Just binged all the chapters and I would like to say I’m thoroughly impressed. Story is good, pacing is quite fast but still very good. Also there is little to no grammer mistakes. Also the characters are well written and Michael’s(Mc) personality is really likeable. Hope you continue your awesome work author👍👍
Sweeps83
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LIKENo worries. And on the top of my head can’t say anything now about feedback as your doing incredible for a first time writing. All I ask is that you update regularly which you are. 👍👍
Sweeps83:Thanks for the kind words and please feel free to provide feedback and suggestions as this is my first work. [img=recommend]