This is practically a blatant rip off of Lord of the Mysteries. Aside from the Mc and his system/cheat thing there is very little original content. You’ve just taken lotm’s entire path system and it’s artifacts and slightly changed their names. If you had listed this as some form of au fan fiction I wouldn’t say anything but posting this and having the audacity to charge for it is completly shameless. The writing is alright but out of respect to the original author Cuttlefush that Loves Diving, I’m giving it 1 star.
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