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Arata_San
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As the author of this book, I would undoubtedly give it a five-star rating. This fanfiction will feature army building and kingdoms, as the main character (MC) will have numerous subordinates, primarily from Rimuru and Makoto Misumi's factions. Additionally, if you notice any peculiar or unusual verbs, I simply want to clarify that I've utilized ChatGPT to enhance the grammar and prose of this fanfiction.

Honkai: The Reincarnated One

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Destroyer404
Destroyer404Lv14Destroyer404

Hope this does not get dropped. Also will their be yuri? Just curious

Destroyer404
Destroyer404Lv14Destroyer404

Also hope the mc saves other characters from their tragic fate even the minor ones (Asakura Mizuki [Herrscher of Lust], Yuna [Herrscher of Poison], Wendy [Herrscher of Wind], and Ana Schariach [Herrscher of Ice]). Also love your work, cant wait for more.

Godwin_Bayawa
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whent are gonna update transcend journey in another world

Sato1_1
Sato1_1Lv4Sato1_1

Will you update your other fics?

Cyro_13
Cyro_13Lv4Cyro_13

please dont drop it again like your other works

Arata_San
Arata_SanAuthorArata_San

Welp... After pondering for a while and reading some reviews here, I’ve decided to completely rewrite this novel. After all, there are many flaws in this fanfic, such as rushed development and, most importantly, a plot that moves too quickly. I also decided to change the concept of the Chat Group into something different, like World Travel once a month. In this rewritten version, I'll use the original concept of the MC’s cheat, which is very different from the Rapid Growth cheat, and hopefully you guys liked with the new cheat in rewrite version.

Cyro_13:please dont drop it again like your other works