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dreamy_charcoalAuthor10mth
2024-05-06 02:21

proper review : 3 for updating stability and 3 for writing of course story starts with hruday main character who has asthma and dislexia which he later discovered he goes to his school reopening only to find out that his life was going to change drastically from that single decision he is just above average smart introverted guy filled dark thoughts and tierd of loop (ahh why does it feel like I am describing myself except the above average part) this story contains base building element which people don't put lot of emphasis on just watch how a teen tries to manage a entire base filled with adults and it has lot of gore later on and shows mentel and emotional conditions of survivors later on as years pass don't worry it won't be boring long let me give you a spoiler no a hint : real crow, super special I Really don't know how to review without getting excited and spoil so that's it give me some review guys and show some mercy

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harish_v_5236Lv2

I kind of knew it from the start 馃槀 it was obvious I guess because I read the part that you had deleted

harish_v_5236
harish_v_5236Lv2

keep it up you are improving in terms of update but please stop uploading unedited chapters it ruins the fun

dreamy_charcoal
dreamy_charcoalAuthor

I will do that I Was just trying to be consistent thank you so much for review

harish_v_5236:keep it up you are improving in terms of update but please stop uploading unedited chapters it ruins the fun
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