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2024-09-12 11:16

extremely good story very different spin on the og novel but it has quite good future prospects ; the writing quality is also above avg but the update speed leaves much to be desired. Story pace as well as char development is quite smooth and seamless. Sincerely hope u dont drop this one i am looking quite forward to the ending

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Yes it's a good story but it would have been better if the "author" here on webnovel said that he didn't write the story! After all, the original version is on fanfiction net under the name "Losing Control" by "JackPotr". It's also a competed story so you can everything there and also, the chapter 14 here is the chapter 2 on fanfiction and there is 15chapters..... that make a lot of chapter to read!

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thx for informing. author really should give proper credit however i just cant deal with the shitty ui of fanfic so i can only read here but ill definitely leave him a review to put proper credits

Orions:Yes it's a good story but it would have been better if the "author" here on webnovel said that he didn't write the story! After all, the original version is on fanfiction net under the name "Losing Control" by "JackPotr". It's also a competed story so you can everything there and also, the chapter 14 here is the chapter 2 on fanfiction and there is 15chapters..... that make a lot of chapter to read!
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