Good read but not a great fan of Dark Fantasy that has child sacrifice. Writing Quality: Fairly readable. Story development: not to be judgemental but good development yet I am not the fan of such dark fantasy and cold, calculating Mc that doesn't even show his love to his women. Character design; Fairly good with lots of progression is side characters and heroines too which is very rare on villain novels. Later on the antagonists are real deal because multiple system and modern people. The battle of calculation is good but that's it's downside because it's slow pace. Update stability: 5/5... Best update stability🔥 World Background: 3/5... Not much known about world aside from necessary things, perhaps the world building will be starting soon, the novel is slow pace... Very slow pace. Overall: 3/5 This is a great potential story, with a reasonable and logical Mc which also becomes a down side for this novel. Slow Pace, Less action, less bed actions, more calculation, strong words are holding this boil down. If Mc showed more love to his women, more bed action and better world progression then you might have gotten more readers. The story is good for dark fantasy lover where Mc doesn't even hesitate to kill child then it's for you.
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1. Idk My Mc treats his women way better than most 'loving' where females are only to be bred. 2. Correct! It's a dark fantasy novel with child sacrifice as kids below 12 posses spiritual embryo and above possess spirit roots. Being a swallowing origin spirit root, a underdeveloped spirit embryo helps greatly which I thinks is a solid point... Not to mention without a proper spirit, the setting also stops people from cultivating early which can be advantageous for Bai Lung as he can gain early advantage against those reincarnated emperors. 3. Yeah! It is indeed slow place novel... With a silica character interaction mainly focused on monologues, strategy and plan. However, if you think these plans are something then you are wrong. I have yet to explore the maximum intelligence of character... Assuming you have read up to latest free chapters, you are still lacking the perfect knowledge on Mc's new intelligence. 4. I take your review as genuine positivity and thank you for the feedback, I am also sorry to hear you aren't much interested in this book but it's understandable as this book isn't getting any recognition and I myself think of dropping it however, there is furball who reads daily so, I don't know just writing for him, maybe once he stops reading, I will drop it.
