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What immediately caught my attention as a writer myself was that, the paraphrasing and the framing of sentences are so well put together, the devils are literally in the details, you can see that for yourself. I already love the author's style of writing. The characters are so well fleshed out! And I've only soared through the first two chapter. <3

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