Review Detail of ArtbusterBeeze in The Tale of The Newly Born Rebel

What you got here is a good story. the characters are amazing, the story is also well done and the style of writing was easy to flow through. The world building, I would say it somewhat builds progressively but there are detailed descriptions. And the Action kept me engaged to the story. Although this is good, in the beginning there is a few running on sentences. You would want to add a full stop to not have those sentences go on like that. This is the only problem iv'e noticed as everything else seemed on point. The Author does improve in later chapters though so I would still give it to them. I'll say this was still a worthwhile read.