its not that good considering the updates, rates and title. Mc personality is switching one time he tryna be scared and another second he'll be showing his skills and powers. just decide first which approach deos this mc want like he tryina be like lowkey and popular also its cringe too. too much smiling like foolish, mood switching i just can't hope u will improve it i know this is your first novel but first understand the foundation of anime or character if you want to properly write. when i furst saw the fanfic of cote i got excited but no i got dissapointed like how he be getting 10 million points like that easily and the plot is also not that accurate sorry but i just can't read it.
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