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Mori_sofos
Mori_sofosLv1416d
2024-11-06 04:03

really great book. my only "negative" point IS that the author IS a unexperienced (as seen in the First few, non rewritten Chapters), tho He steadily improves and, from what i have seen, IS Open to critique. the Chapters are Sometimes a Bit all over the place and there are a few inconsistencies with the Story. over all IT IS definetly a great book with pretty original ideas and i will become an Avid Reader for sure

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ay thanks man, i rlly do I improve so that more people read my stories

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