Review Detail of Jackleell in Naruto: The Hima clan
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This story has so much potential, but all I can say is please get an editor for this. The grammar can sometimes be bad. I'm only giving it 3 stars for now. It currently has 25 chapters, and it may become good later on, at which point I will change my rating. However, if it becomes worse, I will leave my current rating.
Naruto: The Hima clan
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So what if it's interesting? I'm giving it a low rating because it only has 25 chapters, and you know how authors can mess up a novel. I'm not going to give it a higher rating. If I give it 5 stars, it would mean it's perfect, and nothing is perfect in this world, mate.
Daoist8uleLZ:if the only problem you are commenting on is the grammar at least give it a bit more the story is interesting not like other storys thta simply "follow the plot"
Im not telling you to give it a 5 but literally a part of the review is rating the story so far and I admit you are rigth you can easelly mess a story really bad in a litle span of time like having a harem butif you are going to give it a half finished review that may change in the future its better to simply not give it anything eveb if it was a 5 star review
Jackleell:So what if it's interesting? I'm giving it a low rating because it only has 25 chapters, and you know how authors can mess up a novel. I'm not going to give it a higher rating. If I give it 5 stars, it would mean it's perfect, and nothing is perfect in this world, mate.