Hey Author here. Don't mind me just shamelessly giving myself a five star review for my hard work. Although there are and will be some mistakes, I advise you look past those and just enjoy the book. Don't forget to leave your reviews after you read the first Arc

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The story is alright but the R.O.B. stuff goes on for 4 chapters and you just hope the God will shut up as soon as possible but he doesn't. the author tries to inject emotional situations into the story but they are horrbily forced, from the no-option, option about his family to Yamamoto and his adopted son; comes out of no where, no build up, and in scenarios they don't fit. Grammar isn't great. lots of missing words or unfinished sentences. spacing errors. if you get past all that there is an intriguing plot and characters that havent been applied in this manner. it has potential if the authors writing gets better but at this point its just average.

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This story has so much potential, but all I can say is please get an editor for this. The grammar can sometimes be bad. I'm only giving it 3 stars for now. It currently has 25 chapters, and it may become good later on, at which point I will change my rating. However, if it becomes worse, I will leave my current rating.

Its a unique story different from other naruto fanfics. I loved the story. Please update moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....[img=update]

I'm going to give a 5 star review because I love the world of naruto, I also love the clan boss or kingdom building theme, the only flaw was the clan's powers, which are good but without the potential to face an otsutsuki, another thing, no You can write a Naruto fanfic and the protagonist doesn't have doujutsu

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