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Bouncy_Beast
Bouncy_BeastLv47mth
2024-04-29 23:56

The writing quality is good, I couldn't read past the 1st chapter of the story It's pretty bad actually hence no star to story development, updating is good, overall would not recommend.

One Piece: the son of Kaido

truepowerscaler1
1.7
28 Chs

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Magoo_s_loverboy14
Magoo_s_loverboy14Lv4

don't give it three stars then

7mth
Bouncy_Beast
Bouncy_BeastLv4

I didn't, I only gave writing quality 4 stars and world building 3 stars and other 1 stars for other options overall ratings was 2.8 . even if you don't like the story you have to write your review honestly and truly. you can't give everything 1 star just because the story is not for you. maybe other readers like reading about 5 year old twins being sexual. that's why when you rate a story there are multiple aspects to rate.

Magoo_s_loverboy14:don't give it three stars then
7mth
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Bouncy_Beast
Bouncy_BeastLv4

honestly I usually never give bad reviews I only ever gave ratings to really really good stories. because I was really expecting this story to be a good read while reading the first few paragraphs. but after MC turned 5 I couldn't read it if you want to give it a try just read the first real chapter.

Magoo_s_loverboy14:don't give it three stars then
7mth
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Profound_deity
Profound_deityLv14

The mc is a pedo who has no problem with doing sexual stuff with a 5 year old Yamato , if that doesn’t turn you off from this fic then you’re a weirdo

7mth

Drimy
DrimyLv4

Absolute garbage. In the first chapter the mc is going after a 5 year old. Then it’s another system novel and lastly they start talking about sword intent like it’s some cultivation novel. Highly recommend not reading this.

7mth
G0n
G0nLv4

Straight up garbage. The mc is grooming(and kissing) his 5yo sister. Someone get the mf who wrote this behind bars

7mth
RudeSmile
RudeSmileLv4

I need to bleach my eyes after reading this #*!&

7mth
DivineLycoris12
DivineLycoris12Lv4

The writing is pretty bad, the author doesn’t even capitalize I and the main character is grooming his sister.

7mth
reader_of_novels
reader_of_novelsLv14

First chapter got the mc sexually assaulting a 5 year old, insta dropped

7mth
4Eyes
4EyesLv11

Better use world /Verse magic, if you want write the verse/World use the Power System from that world,One Piece already have haki, and devil fruit. - character who reincarnated and kissed his 5 year old sister, what did the MC do in the previous world? pedo?? 😹😹.

7mth
Mikey_3214
Mikey_3214Lv4

Author making his pedo wet dream become true with a 5 year old… This… —-aaaaaaaa so you were 16 in your last life 5 year time skip which would make you around 21 mentally and you tryna go ham on your 5 year old sister I know I am down bad but this is beyond downbad you need to get that check it’s scary people like you outside

6mth
Door8272
Door8272Lv4

i didn't read the story but i heard it has lots of grooming so 1 star

7mth
Mario_Russo_0188
Mario_Russo_0188Lv1

So far and good this fanfic has great continuing potential so I'm confident it will be a great fanfic P.S. please make him king of the world

7mth
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