Quality 5/5, nothing to say here, the english is indeed english and understandable, the style is alright. Update 5/5, currently 3 chapters in 9 day so pretty good. Story dev: 2/5. Not enough explanation of the setting. The story go wild from the start without goal explanation or logic. The timeline is also wrong, Mc arrive in X781 (aka 3 year before canon start) but Lyon is already in Lamia Scale. Mc use a sharingan but we don't know how it work. Does it have chakra? Has it been adapted to the fairy tail world and now use ethernano? What about the reserve of Mc? In introduction Mc is said to have to power of Tobi but we never saw him use anything else than sharingan-copied magic and kamui, what about all the elemental technique?Genjutsu? Is he purposelly dumbifying himself? Character design 2/5. Mc died then got isekaied. That's it, no more info, no backstory, no development (i mean there is only 3 chapter so ok but still...). The moment he arrived he start acting like Obito in his Tobi persona for.... reason? He go to Fairy Tail to introduce himself and cause a commotion for... reason? Then go do the same in Lamia Scale for.... reason? You get the gist , the story progress without sense or plot, just Mc doing Mc thing because. World background 3/5. Nothing to see here so far. No apparent change nor more pronounce lore. Again, chapter 3 so excusable but it's also not as if there was a lot of description. Overall 3.4/5
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