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Kalachri
KalachriLv48mth
2024-04-26 02:31

[current chapters: 3] The chapters are ok and the story is moving in a good direction. I can't find any major problem with it so far. The only minor negative point I found is the grammar, but I correct the mistakes subconsciously in my mind.

I am Morty Sanchez

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3.7
153 Chs

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