Review Detail of AuroraMoon in The Passage of Time

Hi. Welcome to my fictional universe, I’m not the best at writing but I have always wanted to create something like this world of cultivation with a cool FL. I’m not good at romance writing either so it will appear a bit later on in the story. I truly hope I can give the story more life and hopefully my world build will get better as the story progresses. There might be grammatical errors in the writing. 😩 I will shamelessly give it a 3 out 5.