I commend the you for good translation and some editing.You did fine work .I only have problem with the story so this will be my dissatisfaction of the raw author. Mc is in Japanese anime and is Japanese and has named his daughter like Chinese xiaxia Novels ok fine. Mc has problems writing Japanese Manga or comic and also monsense that he must adapt chinese element? Is this chinese superiority mentality like they can copy good works praise them and then think adding chinese elemen5 is better because he can't use Japanese story .this is just in few chapters. Too much chineese and there is nothing to do .The story is not bad as a chill but these things are regular in any chineese story and I guarantee thr author also have only watched few animes because he could have known that "Your Name" has light Novel that is just in first 10 chapters showing how much chineese mentality is toxic they have audacity to write about a japanese fantic and then have mc not comfortable with it but plagarising with chineese culture is fine.bahhh so imagine If I write about more 380+ chapters there will be almost 10 essays so Short review.
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