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DeZun
DeZunLv149mth
2024-06-24 19:16

[Written as of Chapter 44] Pros: > Top tier writing quality. You're gonna love it as much as how you will love the view if you're on the top floors of Burf Khalifa > The characters have their own charm and I really love how they feel so alive and distinct > You will be entertained as the comedy is just hilarious and very creative of its delivery > The plot makes you want to know more of the backstory, so its not quite boring and predictable Cons: > The writing quality can make someone, whose English is not their strong suit, have a bit of a hard time understanding the texts. So I suggest you best prepare yourselves > I was disappointed since the MC, who was blessed to have OP magical powers, not use it quite often or even flex it. > If you lean more on action, fighting, and murder, then this novel is might not be for you as this mostly focus on face-slapping, verbal battles, and politics. I expected that there be more fighting but I guess I was wrong. But if you guys don't mind, then go ahead > Was looking forward for the whole setting of the story explaining the parts of the empire and other neighboring lands, but I guess the author didn't dwell into that All in all, a superb novel to read that will not waste your precious time but will just left you continue reading it until you caught up to the current chapters. PS. reviews are not my strong suit so I apologize for that

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_Snow_flake_
_Snow_flake_Author

Aww that's really such a kind review from you! I am almost in tears!😭 Sorry, I'm not very good at writing fighting scenes and I worry I will end up making it boring, so I just go with verbal battles more. Don't you worry! We will get to exploring the neighboring lands and such in the future (hopefully, XD) As for flexing the mc's power, we will get there one day for sure. It's just a long journey of patience, for him and us both, hehe. All in all, thank you for reading! It really means a lot to hear such good words after putting in so much hard work ❤️

BLACKQEAZER
BLACKQEAZERLv4

what is the alignment of the MC ? hero or benefit oriented villain or Neutral-evil ? and is there romance or harem???

_Snow_flake_:Aww that's really such a kind review from you! I am almost in tears!😭 Sorry, I'm not very good at writing fighting scenes and I worry I will end up making it boring, so I just go with verbal battles more. Don't you worry! We will get to exploring the neighboring lands and such in the future (hopefully, XD) As for flexing the mc's power, we will get there one day for sure. It's just a long journey of patience, for him and us both, hehe. All in all, thank you for reading! It really means a lot to hear such good words after putting in so much hard work ❤️
_Snow_flake_
_Snow_flake_Author

Well, it's hard to say since he has complex feelings about things. You can say he is a revenge-oriented villain? Other than that, he is pretty neutral 💁🏻‍♀️ As for harem or romance, yes to romance. No harem, sorry. Our MC is a one-woman man ✨️

BLACKQEAZER:what is the alignment of the MC ? hero or benefit oriented villain or Neutral-evil ? and is there romance or harem???
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

_Snow_flake_:Well, it's hard to say since he has complex feelings about things. You can say he is a revenge-oriented villain? Other than that, he is pretty neutral 💁🏻‍♀️ As for harem or romance, yes to romance. No harem, sorry. Our MC is a one-woman man ✨️
DoomofTennos
DoomofTennosLv15

I see that the FL on the character list is the girl who betrayed him... you telling me he gonna crawl back to the chick who betrayed him?? please inform me of their dynamic, cuz I don't wanna start reading hoping for revenge, only for it to end with him tamed

_Snow_flake_:Well, it's hard to say since he has complex feelings about things. You can say he is a revenge-oriented villain? Other than that, he is pretty neutral 💁🏻‍♀️ As for harem or romance, yes to romance. No harem, sorry. Our MC is a one-woman man ✨️
He_Kentucky
He_KentuckyLv2

Yeah, I just skipped to chapter 217

DoomofTennos:I see that the FL on the character list is the girl who betrayed him... you telling me he gonna crawl back to the chick who betrayed him?? please inform me of their dynamic, cuz I don't wanna start reading hoping for revenge, only for it to end with him tamed
Tsu_U
Tsu_ULv3

it's wayyy more complex but she didn't betray him just was a plot and she wasn't even there it was someone else

DoomofTennos:I see that the FL on the character list is the girl who betrayed him... you telling me he gonna crawl back to the chick who betrayed him?? please inform me of their dynamic, cuz I don't wanna start reading hoping for revenge, only for it to end with him tamed
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