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2024-09-26 20:54

I have read up to 25 chapters. I felt like the author was rushing for some big reveals, but there is no world building. I guess there would be a character development regarding his hatred towards the guild, but the world building is inconsistent. there is no power scaling, and the guild master directly wants to talk with him. and 50 year old technology is considered ancient. There are no guards. Like a city where the surrounding is infested and he can easily climb the walls and for someone who can increase the strength like 5 times he can easily adapt. i don't mind simple plots but i at least want some depth in either the character or the world

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