Good story quality, Interesting story development to continue following, character design is quite classic, but good! world background like the previous novel, but worth following, overall average can be described as a very good and interesting novel!
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LIKEEh? My friend doesn't know if you know this or not, but most fanfic stories nowadays are like that, they only consist of 500 to 700 words per chapter, maybe the writers are just following those novels? I don't know...
Gh0st00:but I feel you could have put two chapters even three chapters together to make one proper chapter instead of having 50 something it would be like 20 something or 18 more like it