seems boring and bland i also don't quite understand the use of his sacred gear. angel/devil he can turn into an angel or devil for a limited time(5min). in a world of only humans and maybe yokai, that might be an interesting concept but in dxd it just seems so utterly useless, i just don't see the point, there are ways to become a devil or an angel already, so why?

Its Boring did read all chaps and there is nothing exciting about this FF.

Otro FanFiction de un gordo perdedor virgen que vive en casa de sus papás 😔 Tenía fe al principio, pero después se vuelve una porquería genérica como todos los inútiles escritores de este sitio.

OK so lets start on this one. 1. The title doesn't Match the opening scene in the slightest and that's kind of necessary in some regard and the complete lack of a synopsis isn't helping. 2. All we got is the usual go school in high school DxD. This is overused by this point and is killing DxD fic's 3. The writting quality is good at least very readable. Overall The author desperately needs some original ideas but has the writing part down.

Another story with an idiotic MC driven by emotions in a stupid way that is just ridiculous and causes even more problems, apart from the lack of objectives, it's not so bad in the beginning but the fact that he is led by the other characters is unbearable, sometimes even not wanting anymore not having enough decision to just do what he wants, sad and disgusting character.

This story is really good and the character s are interesting. The story is still is in it’s early stages and is being mass released so can’t say anything about the update stability. The characters and world building are quite good since so far they are constant with the source material. Only criticism I can give is please change the name of the fanfic. Although the name is thought provoking it gives off Chinese MTL fanfic vibes, this will push away a lot of readers who will not even give a chance to the fanfic and will automatically assume that it is trash. Except that so far the story has been well written and I hope it continues on like this.

so how's he the husband og yasaka? ,........................................................?????????????????????

I normally don't write these but I kinda want 2 for this one. Just ignore the idiots who don't like it and keep going. This might not be for everyone, but you shouldn't be trying to ever make everyone happy. It's a good work that I enjoy reading so please keep it up

The story is good, but the title is kinda misleading lol. You might wanna change it to something like “double gear” or “Florida man moves to Japan!” (JK on the second one lol) and I don’t know if you added a dead or alive tag but you might wanna just to show that this is a au dxd.

Hahaha when I read the title all I could think of was this