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2025-01-06 01:16

Drags on the characters' ignorance and ridiculous "I'm miss independent " attitude. But she literally can't take care of herself and finds herself in constant danger or being kidnapped. MC is extremely frustratingly stupid. I hate books that make male characters gravel when there is a reason for how they behaved and the MFC inability to understand this until you've already invested money for more useless chappf the same thing. The writing is good and has so much potential, but the author dragged this on for way too long, so I stopped purchasing coins as a result. Way too much redundant complaining and ignorance. Won't be finishing the book.

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