Good story but your patreon is extremely costly. Please have a look at other creators, especially creators that have high ranked work in fanfiction category and then decide the pricing of your work on patreon.

great translation. -1 star for not crediting the OG.

Fanfic muito boa, pena que o patreon é muito caro o genin na minha moeda fica 25r$ e pra mim é caro pra karai, mas a historia é bem legal, é raro achar fanfic sobre ferreiro

Bloated mess. It is preachy filled with explanations on explanations and back stories of back stories. The amount of filler and repetitive nonsense is astounding. Whatever story being told gets drowned in the excessive filler for word count.

EXCELLENT! Very unique story with an amazing story style that'll blow your mind. I really like the reaction of people when they see the effect of soma's swords. People shouldn't be dissing and low rating this novel for patron problem, this is webnovel, judge the book for its content here.

I like the story a lot it's not the greatest but it is a fun read the only issue I have with it is very system dependent and in my opinion that's taking quite a bit away from the story it'd be a little better if he did more blacksmithing and work on his own without complete Reliance on the system especially even to get bonuses or points from the system it should not be some odd Loop where it has to be pretty much maintained from the system by the system him earning anything should at least be somewhat separate

Interessante, mal posso esperar para começar a ler 😃____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Anyone know the raw

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