How does a novel, which the author mentions, is something he wrote. Yet has the typical translation issues of misused genders, continually changing names, and more. Like, bruh, if you wrote it, you should have the same consistent names.

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I loved this book, until I got to the part he made his sub-star. I felt the actions of the MC were quite disgusting given the circumstances, and that's not the kind of romance I want to read. For that reason alone I am dropping what was otherwise a fantastic novel.

Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert] I am sure many people are confused if this author in webnovel is a real author or just a translator.. The reason many people are confused is because the author on this webnovel claims that this is his work (which is true).. But the problem is, there are sooooo many times that the author KEEP CHANGING the naming of the class or job profession, or the name of the skills or item and so on.. Luckily, the character names are fixed.. Yes, there are many names of "things" that keep changing and changing and changing.. Unless the author has a short-term memory of a goldfish, it never happens if you are a real author.. BUT, most translators made these mistakes.. That is why many people doubt if the author here is the real author.. And don't be mistaken by these "naming errors" as if this novel has poor English. Instead, compared to MTL, it is actually a good one..And this problem only last 100+ chapters.. Since last month or two, those mistakes haven't happened anymore.. The novel is quite entertaining, and as a fan of OP MC, this novel does have an OP MC.. MC does have a golden finger.. He can evolve his talent, item, and so on once per day.. MC started with D-rank, so on 1st day, evolved it into C-rank.. 2nd day, C-rank into B-rank.. 3rd day, A-rank.. 4th day S-rank, 5th day SS-rank and 6th day, evolved it into SSS-rank.. It is nice as MC can evolve his scroll, technique, skill, talent, or anything.. The only limit is he can only do it once per day.. If MC evolved the skill today, he needs to wait to evolve other things tomorrow or later on.. MC kinda likes to max out the skill in one go (continue evolving for a few days until it got max) before changing others' items or skills or talent.. MC got absolutely no pride.. His didn't care for his reputation at all.. For example, there are Spark Program (Program for young genius), the person responsible to recruit this program is so arrogant and treat MC as trash to the point he said, "Outsiders may value the talents in the Spark Program highly, but with our status, we don't need be so concerned.. They're just a bunch of dogs we're raising." MC been compared to a dog, and he still accepts this person invitation.. The other race keep mocking MC to no end and treat him like a garbage, but MC just ignore them.. "If" the tournament lasts for a week, then for the whole week, MC will be mocked every day.. And MC will still choose to ignore them without doing anything or trying to defend himself.. But if we thinks positively, he is trying to stay under the radar to avoid any unnecessary conflicts or troubles.. Other than that, when other finally saw MC true strength, they made an attempt to act close with MC as friendly as possible.. What annoying is that MC seems like he forget that they are the one that keep mocking him earlier, and what worse is that MC did treat them nicely.. ⚠️Reminder: There are adult scenes in this novel, and there are no warnings by author at all.. Imagine you reading this novel suddenly during the adult scene, your wife or girlfriend or kid come near you to see what you are doing on the phone, and they saw you reading adult scene.. So, you might feel awkward and subconsciously uncomfortable that suddenly the adult scene comes out while you are reading this novel in public or when you are near other people.. So, don't read this novel in public.. The levelling and ranking also not organise and arrange nicely.. Blue tier skill (above lv61), Purple-tier skill (above lv91), Golden-tier skill (above lv141), and so on.. Yes, Lv61 then Lv91, then Lv141.. If you read and follow a bunch of novels, you might forget about this novel levelling rank.. It is better if the author makes ranking easier to remember, like Lv50, then Lv100 and then Lv150, and so on.. But after Ch150+, the ranking change.. 2nd-class level: Lv60-Lv100 3rd-class level: Lv100-Lv150 Legendary-class level: Lv150-Lv250 Demigod-class level: Lv250-Lv500 God realm: Lv500+ So, yes, it is quite confusing as you read this novel because it changes certain things suddenly, like the author keeps forgetting what he wrote on his beginning chapters.. Maybe this is an old author?? Or has dementia?? Or maybe after reading my previous reviews last month, the author changed it? My previous review was deleted by the author (even when I give 4.2 stars on previous review 😭 but now I dropped it a little bit).. Plus, this novel uses this rank, Black Iron (lowest), Bronze, Silver, Gold, Platinum, Diamond, Legendary, Epic, Mythical (Highest, so far).. Most novels, Legendary rank is better than Epic rank, so when this novel makes Legendary rank lower than Epic rank, I am sure the reader will also get confused.. We, the readers will always think like this, "Is this novel has Legendary-rank better than or lower than Epic-rank?" Well, I can't blame the author because there are also "some" authors who make Legendary rank is weaker than Epic rank.. Moreover, the EXP here is like energy.. After killing monsters, player will get EXP, but the problem is that they need to digest the EXP to level up.. So, MC already accumulated so much EXP by killing numerous high level monsters, but because he didn't digest it by sitting down and cultivating his accumulated EXP, his level won't level up.. So, MC levelling speed is quite slow.. MC always becomes the person who has the lowest level in any place he goes.. Overall, I love this novel because I LOVES OP MC.. This evolved power kinda OP.. The author is not Nerf MC at all.. The update is quite fast too.. The pace kinda steady because even though his levelling speed is quite slow, his inner strength/overall power does rise quickly.. So I guess that the author balancing it.. If you like OP MC from the beginning, you might love this novel..

is this translated ?? if it is can u provide the raw? if its not keep up the good work author

yeah I had to drop this because I, don't want to read a hentai. there was no need for it to be done and as fast as it just jumped at you was a little unsettling. I came to read because of how the book was described. not what I was expecting

this is not your story right I mean everything till now, seems like a Chinese story to me, what I mean is sect word is only used by Chinese people I I am not saying that no other person can use that but the whole story based on that f****** sect and different. one only Chinese f****** peoples can do, and no matter what, you will do some kind of mistakes and you will forget that even about sect if you are not from China or your memory is not strong so I think this is not your story or if this is your story which I don't think it is,If it is your then your translator from which you are translating your story in English language is is doing any kind of good job

i have to drop this novel, its simply to badly written, the spelling is fine but there is zero consistency in names. Plus a severe lack of info that just appears as facts mid chapter. The mc is also really poorly made, i understand the need for him to keep his abilitys a secret. But mindlessly killing everyone who find out even the slightest bit about him, or just watching as people get brutally tortured or killed just to keep his secret is too much and makes him seem like the villain of the story

Not keen of mc developmet..eventhough i like antihero veraion sometime its too much