This fanfic is so frustrating to read because the Author has only one thing inhis mind and that is not to make the MC OP even though he has the resources and opportunities and comes up with stupid ideas just so his fanfic could be different from other fanfics just for the sake of looking different and later gives some BS reasoning behind it and expect for us to just accept it Not worth the read and is mostly an Author trying his hard to be different just for the sake of it

Muy pronto para dar un reseña objetiva . Pero por el momento me gusta, además que estaba buscando hace mucho un fanfic de esta historia. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

I love your fanfic brother, the only thing I complain about is that your chapters are not longer, you have some errors in your writing but not bad for it being your first time, please keep improving, you have my full support

esta ok, no es el mejor fanfic pero tampoco es basura, es entretenido, bueno para pasa el rato, si puedes leelo. 5 estrellas por que no soy critico ni escritor para estar dando opiniones objetivas

Meh.😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑🤔😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

SPOILER, ESCREVENDO AQUI PARA AVISAR OQUE ME INCOMODOU NA HISTÓRIA PARA CASO VC TENHA O MESMO PROBLEMA Bom, quando percebi que não ia ser harém, confesso que deu uma desanimada, ainda mais quando ele fazia todas personagens acharem MC lindo e blá blá blá, mas o relacionamento com a Ramona tava bem desenvolvido e gostoso de ver... Agora, aceitar que não vai ter harém eu aceitei, fazer outros personagens se relacionar, por mais que me doa, aceitei, AGORA descrever uma cena de sexo com a Kin e o Scott com certeza me pegou, sério cara, não entendo pq fazer essa cena, faz eles namorar e pronto, é necessário escrever essa merda? Enfim, fiquei MT puto e ainda fico quando lembro dessa cena, abandonei a história aqui

Really good, some people may not like it but the character development and interactions are really epic, it doenst feel robotic or cliche at all, not only the romantic moments of mc and ramona are peak but his interaction with other characters is also really fun and interesting, the fact thia is in a wolrd we havent seen like Scottpilgrim VS the world makes this novel even better, specially since its one of the few gems that had only 1 love interest.

Muy buena obra bro, sigue así y por favor no la dejes caer. ¡Se ha convertido en una de mis obras favoritas sin lugar a dudas! Eres increíble en esto y no te dejes desmotivar. (Recuerda es tu fic y sin dudas tú eliges que sucede con el.)

It's a good fic which fits my taste, the writer knows english so that's already a good sign for me. I would actually recommend you read it. The grammar could be better but I barely noticed it, due to all these MTL's I'm reading. It's a good breath of fresh air for me