Review Detail of StingLikeAMountain in The Servant's General

Heya NEETs, author here. I'll give myself a mid review because I don't like it myself when I see other authors give themselves 5 stars, I know my work isn't perfect. Anyways- I'm still a fairly new author and have little experience and I'm mostly writing in spare time, but if you enjoy this then leave a review or let me know some things I could improve on. If you want some more info, check out the auxiliary chapter. Thanks~