Review Detail of Black_Reeper in Naruto: Time Traveler
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I read up until chapter 24, here’s my review: Great grammar and writing quality, character are written well and the pacing is really good, the time travel ability is a unique aspect that makes it more unique than other Naruto ffs, the MC gets stronger by training in a time loop… But I’m Dropping this ff for one reason and that’s because the MC tells Itachi that he’s a prophet (has a kekkei genkai) that can see the future and wants to stop Itachi from following the plot. Now this might not be a bad thing for others but I just don’t like this path for a Naruto fic…If u don’t mind that then this is a great Naruto ff
Naruto: Time Traveler
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Thanks for the review and especially for the praising of the grammar and writing quality of the first 24 chapters, that was unexpected as the early chapters contains a lot of mistakes due to that it's my first writing work and English is my second language, and I didn't expect to someone actually say something good about it, thanks. Sorry to hear that the plot development is not to your liking though, thanks for reading this far!
Great work man, I didn’t notice any errors for 24 chapters, ur grammar is much better than most ffs trust me….
Sycore_w:Thanks for the review and especially for the praising of the grammar and writing quality of the first 24 chapters, that was unexpected as the early chapters contains a lot of mistakes due to that it's my first writing work and English is my second language, and I didn't expect to someone actually say something good about it, thanks. Sorry to hear that the plot development is not to your liking though, thanks for reading this far!
Black_Reeper:Great work man, I didn’t notice any errors for 24 chapters, ur grammar is much better than most ffs trust me….