Review Detail of Rak in Naruto: Time Traveler

Item: Naruto: Time Traveler
Rating: 4.4

Review detail

RakLv52mthRak

Good start, till now no actual time travel happened but its early days. In my opinion author is bit slow in the story tho.............................. give it a try i guess

Naruto: Time Traveler

Sycore_w

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Sycore_wAuthorSycore_w

Thanks for the review. Glad to hear that you like it. Story is a bit slow and has flaws, I re-read the written chapters so far and there is a lot of room for improvements, and I'm working on it

2mth

RakLv5Rak

yes, you have improved alot in just a month, multiple loops also happened. sadly mc has normal talent, i hope you write 1000+ chapters and make the mc become battle harden and then have him come back in time to become OP

Sycore_w:Thanks for the review. Glad to hear that you like it. Story is a bit slow and has flaws, I re-read the written chapters so far and there is a lot of room for improvements, and I'm working on it

1mth