Shameless 5 start Author review. Update after writing 30+ chapters: I have to say, that early chapters contains a lot of mistakes and lacks quality, so be prepared for that. I'm trying my best to improve as I go, and later on chapters become better, but I still have a long way to go to achieve the level of quality I want. So yea, I'm a newbie author with English as a second language, I'm doing the best I can, but early chapters is really bad and I don't think I will ever rewrite them, as it will require a lot of time and I'm already struggling to publish chapters once a day, so that's that. As for the story itself - well, it's progressing, and the more I write the more excited I become about what will happen next. The MC will become stronger gradually, there will be some fights, different kind of missions, and of course more time travel. We will see how it goes.

It's a good fanfic, but let's get real, mc doesn't have time powers, he has the limited ability of transfering his consciousness to his previous self and somehow each use uses up all his spiritual energy (for example he wanted to return 1 hour to the past). This is annoying, because you can do so much with time powers: stop, slow barier (jjk six eyes), gravity (because gravity is a combination of space and time), recovery, bring back from the dead, time paradox explosions (delete button) and etc, the imagination is the limit..

Good start, till now no actual time travel happened but its early days. In my opinion author is bit slow in the story tho.............................. give it a try i guess

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It's still early to say anything.. but it seems like a promising novel with good amount of World Building and Seemingly a MC that I will not hate at the very least..

That story have a great potential ! the time travel power have a lot of possibility, author-san make a great job to structurated that (please don't make that to complicated later). I'm very impatient to see how the MC will deal with his futur friend or love after they forget him or how the power will evovle later !! Don't hesitate to read that story !

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Good read! It’s good as in very good haha. The time loop will make even you crazy tho 🤣