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DumbWeeb11
DumbWeeb11Lv46mth
2024-07-30 03:06

Great Novel! The characters are well written an feel pretty real, they dont feel like cheap cardboard. The only issue i have with this which is a personal one and not one most people would have is the main character. Hes just simply not strong enough. Dont get me wron his progression in both strength and character have been great, but ive read many novels with the same premise so its gotten kinda boring for me. Im half tempted to write a fanfic on this where everything is the same just the Mc is absolutely Op like Gojo Satoru levels of Op. I think the interactions between the Mc and the other characters would be mega funny. Like Liyana threatens to kill him for being with another girl and he just tells her she cant and that shes weak. Itd be funny as hell.

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R_66
R_66Lv4

if you can please write a Fanfic, I also want to read a Fanfic like that

Discarded
DiscardedLv4

i didnt read this novel yet but reading feon reviews including yours, i see this book mc is actually pretty good at least stable. another side, people who write gimmick mc based on other works like gojo, naruto, sjw, etc end up being low quality well basically fanfic quality nothing more than wish fulfillment quality. you just need wish fulfillment fantasy dosage not a good book

PRINCEAETHER
PRINCEAETHERLv4

I have read the initial chapters, and it is not my type due to his MC personality, which is initially passive and later cowardly and similar to his favorite heroine, and also main villainess has no feelings for MC, just playing with him, like entertainment, 1. he will die the moment the villainess falls in love with the protagonist as of now she has no feelings for MC, in my opinion, it would be best if he kills the protagonist himself, if the protagonist dies, he will be saved and neither world will fall. 2. I don't like how his stats don't grow even if he works hard, it is just pure foolish, I think he is a trash character, he just has lower potential, and it does not mean he can't increase his stat at all . 3. It is purely bad plot how the villainess can only fall for the protagonist, I mean it would be better for him to kill the protagonist than to help the protagonist catch all heroines even his favorite heroine, I guess he has a special fetish, 4. Mc has passive thinking at the start, just lying down and avoiding any problem, it's pure foolish, he is the creator of the game, and he knows his character's ending, which is death, it's pure foolish, it is said he also had a weak mentality in his previous life. 5. I have no problem with strong to weak, I don't like a weak mentality, I guess, because I personally hate weak and cowardly personality i, 6. I imagined that if MC had a personality like Gojo Satorou, he would have first dealt with villains, and his interactions would be hella funny. Thats it, my views on this novel. there are some good points such as the author's writing skills, and heroines.

Zorax
ZoraxLv3

wait so you are saying that he is helping og protag build his harem? I started reading it and I am in chap 8 and I felt the MC is not likeable anymore. If he is goin to give the heroines to the og protag then I am out

PRINCEAETHER:I have read the initial chapters, and it is not my type due to his MC personality, which is initially passive and later cowardly and similar to his favorite heroine, and also main villainess has no feelings for MC, just playing with him, like entertainment, 1. he will die the moment the villainess falls in love with the protagonist as of now she has no feelings for MC, in my opinion, it would be best if he kills the protagonist himself, if the protagonist dies, he will be saved and neither world will fall. 2. I don't like how his stats don't grow even if he works hard, it is just pure foolish, I think he is a trash character, he just has lower potential, and it does not mean he can't increase his stat at all . 3. It is purely bad plot how the villainess can only fall for the protagonist, I mean it would be better for him to kill the protagonist than to help the protagonist catch all heroines even his favorite heroine, I guess he has a special fetish, 4. Mc has passive thinking at the start, just lying down and avoiding any problem, it's pure foolish, he is the creator of the game, and he knows his character's ending, which is death, it's pure foolish, it is said he also had a weak mentality in his previous life. 5. I have no problem with strong to weak, I don't like a weak mentality, I guess, because I personally hate weak and cowardly personality i, 6. I imagined that if MC had a personality like Gojo Satorou, he would have first dealt with villains, and his interactions would be hella funny. Thats it, my views on this novel. there are some good points such as the author's writing skills, and heroines.
PRINCEAETHER
PRINCEAETHERLv4

Why would so many people like this kind of mc and their are many good reviews . I guess my taste is different . I respect other choices

Zorax:wait so you are saying that he is helping og protag build his harem? I started reading it and I am in chap 8 and I felt the MC is not likeable anymore. If he is goin to give the heroines to the og protag then I am out
Aditya_0814
Aditya_0814Lv12

i mean seriously, glad i didn't waste my time on it.

PRINCEAETHER:I have read the initial chapters, and it is not my type due to his MC personality, which is initially passive and later cowardly and similar to his favorite heroine, and also main villainess has no feelings for MC, just playing with him, like entertainment, 1. he will die the moment the villainess falls in love with the protagonist as of now she has no feelings for MC, in my opinion, it would be best if he kills the protagonist himself, if the protagonist dies, he will be saved and neither world will fall. 2. I don't like how his stats don't grow even if he works hard, it is just pure foolish, I think he is a trash character, he just has lower potential, and it does not mean he can't increase his stat at all . 3. It is purely bad plot how the villainess can only fall for the protagonist, I mean it would be better for him to kill the protagonist than to help the protagonist catch all heroines even his favorite heroine, I guess he has a special fetish, 4. Mc has passive thinking at the start, just lying down and avoiding any problem, it's pure foolish, he is the creator of the game, and he knows his character's ending, which is death, it's pure foolish, it is said he also had a weak mentality in his previous life. 5. I have no problem with strong to weak, I don't like a weak mentality, I guess, because I personally hate weak and cowardly personality i, 6. I imagined that if MC had a personality like Gojo Satorou, he would have first dealt with villains, and his interactions would be hella funny. Thats it, my views on this novel. there are some good points such as the author's writing skills, and heroines.
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