If this is anything like the story the preceded it then the only real problem will be the occasional spelling error. Other than that? Swtich your brain off and enjoy the ride, you didn’t come here for a deep story with complex character interactions: you came here to watch an SI waffel-stomp characters you don’t like and get rid of the “Maidenless” status.
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