Item: Legend of Perseus Jackson
Rating: 3.8
Author: Lelol01

Lelol01Lv21yr

2024-04-19 01:31

Yes there are some mistakes buy the story Is great. P.S. try to use the shop system more likes buying weapon or skills, not overpowered, if you Need Just make the price go up a bit

Legend of Perseus Jackson

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