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Blake_Langton
Blake_LangtonLv156mth
2024-07-03 14:40

The Harem aspect straight up ruins this entire story. Mc becomes OP (kinda) straight away but instead of training to keep his family safe or learning more in-depth about the supernatural and mixed up worlds he’s just picking up children (Disgusting Pedo 🤮) He gets all these good items from Gacha and doesn’t use any cause he’s too busy playing with children it’s honestly disgusting and ruins the entire story

DxD: Soul System

Luigi_Lightning
4.3
63 Chs

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Luigi_Lightning
Luigi_LightningAuthor

......pretty sure I mentioned that it was a harem-oriented story that hasn't even evolved into anything that you are thinking but I thank you for your review good sir

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Djabilong
DjabilongLv6

"Disgusting Pedo" you say? 10/10 story, gonna recommend it to everyone.

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Vastoking
VastokingLv5

Ur Troll behavior hasn't gone on noticed.

Djabilong:"Disgusting Pedo" you say? 10/10 story, gonna recommend it to everyone.
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Djabilong
DjabilongLv6

...who said anything about trolling?

Vastoking:Ur Troll behavior hasn't gone on noticed.
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Luigi_Lightning
Luigi_LightningAuthor

So, it has come to my attention that a shameless review by the author is a custom. Well here it is, though I couldn't bring myself to give the stability 5 stars. But! Im pumped for this story.... I just gotta write it....

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Jackleell
JackleellLv1

Okay, I'm not going to get into too much detail on this novel because I don't want to spoil it for people, but I'm on chapter 10. Man, does this guy love collecting female leads. There are about 20—I'm not sure, I lost count, maybe more, maybe less. Oh man, this story feels fun to read, but this kid is collecting women left and right, and he's only 9 years old so far. There is no time skip, and it's getting on my nerves now.

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Qwerttipper
QwerttipperLv4

It is a decent story structure and word wise, but it is just a more refined version of sign in system stories present in faloo novels. The protagonist is very OP but doesn't have the right mindset to use his powers efficiently. He also doesn't abuse the gacha even though it keeps on giving more points than he puts in. All he needed to do was summon until he had all of the most busted abilities the author could imagine. I especially can not forgive it when there is no limit on summoning. Anyways, if you like a self-critical, OP, basic thinking, and unconscious harem aura protagonist, then this is the novel for you.

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DetectiveHarem
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alef_Rilzaki
alef_RilzakiLv2

I'm giving this rating even without reading the story because it's unfair for the mongoloid to give one star as a review just because it's a harem story, the guy is literally complaining about the guy writing a harem fanfic in a story whose main objective of the original protagonist is to create a harem in a universe where harem is a widely accepted thing, the level of this mongoloid is very high.

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StrOke9856
StrOke9856Lv3

great novel love it 😍 and also add Onodera mother and Little sister plz😚

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travion_bell
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I love how the story is going on I hope it gets to 100 chapters.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Justindemigod
JustindemigodLv14

great so far so keep up the good work!!!

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Lust1D
Lust1DLv3

This story is very interesting but unfortunately it is rarely updated ..........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,...........................,.........................,.

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