This is my review as of Chapter 53. Light's characterization in this is on point, there's no moment you'd read and think Light is acting out of character. Keeping in mind this is a Light without the Death Note's influence as that doesn't exist in this story. Ryuk does but he's useless, Light hasn't used him in any way possible except keeping track of cameras and spotting the occasional stalker so he doesn't have any unfair advantage either. The plot itself is intricately woven and Light takes advantage of loopholes hitherto unexplored. I especially was a big fan of the arc where he manipulated Ryueen into expelling a lot of students. The way Light navigates all the different battles is really realistic as well. There's also an original exam which is fairly interesting if you're into mind games and manipulation. There are also a couple of characters who've been developed completely differently from canon and add a new lease of life to the established cast. My only criticism is regarding the characterization of Horikita Manabu and Kiyotaka Ayanokoji. For the former, his analytical abilities have been lowered a lot, he wouldn't fall for a lot of the acts Light puts on, no matter how good he is at them. For Kiyotaka, the complaint is similar but a bit different. His personality is on point but once again, he does feel nerfed and there are a few moments which feel downright contrived or like plot armor for Light. Then again, there is a lot of time to develop in that aspect. To any COTE reader, I'd still recommend this wholeheartedly, it is worth reading. Perhaps the 3rd greatest COTE fic I've read after Checkmate and Wax Wings. Rating: 9/10.
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