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Review Detail of ItzNeedless in Rise of the White Devil

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(Skip the first 10 sentences or so if you don't want to die of brain damage. I was on some white powder my homie got me for me.) Do you wanna see ppl get fucked over? Do you want an MC so fucked in the mind, he would abandon the entire with no second thoughts to accomplish what he wants to achieve? Do you want to see him lose everything and fail? Do you want to see him bound and helpless as he losses a part of him forever? Do you want to see an already broken man, break further? Well, then you're a fucking sadist. Seek help... is what any sane person would tell you. But I am not a sane person. Far from that, really. So here is what I have for you: Go read the fucking novel. For those who are not specifically looking for any of the things I mentioned above and are not as fucked in the mind as me and the rest, congratulations are in order. Coz you're fucking normal. Now that by itself is sad in it's own way but let's not go there. Instead... Here's an ordinary review for you: Writing quality: No glaring flaws here. It's english phd ahh level but none the niggas reading WNs are looking for that shii. Anyways, proper punctuations, no over use of conjunctions, paragraphs of the right length. What more do you need? Stability of Updates: Updated once or twice a day without skipping any days. Instant 5 star. Story development: Stable development. The early chapters are a bit fast but he was a fucking kid anyways. The pace becomes normal after the time skip. Character Design: Well the story is still in the introductory phase so there is not much to say about it rn. But from what we have seen till now, some interesting characters have been introduced. The first is obviously the MC. If how I started this review didn't make it clear, I will say it again. The MC is broken asf. Both with his powers and his mind. Although, even if he has cheat-like powers, all the enemies he will face will be on a far higher level than him so you don't have to worry about it. From what little we see of his past we come to know just how messed up his life is. Although reincarnating and having a family alleviated some of his pain, keeping it that way would make it boring for us readers wouldn't it? Hehe.. hehehe.... Next is Sylv-whatever, she is your classic elven princess type shit so I will skip her. Next is Sera-something, who despite having only been introduced for not more than a couple of chapter, is quite the interesting character already(saying anymore would be a spoiler so I will skip over this). Next is ofc, the hero whose name I already forgot, who Lucas can wipe the floor with coz the hero started training late or whatever. EX.CU.SES. Despite me badmouthing a few of the characters, there are several good characters in the novel. The perfect examples would be the MC's family and the ones who work for them... that being I said, I forgot their names too... World Background: Well, the basic design is the same old with humans and elves and other races against the demons. If anything is new its that the demons are in another world unlike in other novels and mythical races that used to exist in the past play a huge role. Overall I would say this is a novel with good potential and blah blah blah. Finally, I would like to mention that I don't remember all the character names not because I am high, but because I am not good with names... just saying.

Rise of the White Devil

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