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Paybacks_a_bitch
Paybacks_a_bitchLv46mth
2024-06-28 03:52

This is my 1st review on webnovel and to be honest, I consider it an honour to write a review of this book. This novel is literally one of the best reincarnation novels I've read on this app. The mc's able to quickly adapt to his new world but he still displays pieces of his previous world's modern culture in his speech and mannerisms. I think its absolutely amazing how the author manages to keep this balance. The grammar is beyond flawless (and author says his first language isn't English 💀 I don't even want to think about how many grammatical errors I've made while writing this and English is my first language 😭 ) I'm 30 chapters in and it's been worth every minute spent reading. I can't wait to see how the plot progresses.

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Shadow_Demons_24
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Discover a story that will keep you hooked from the first page. Are you ready to embark on this thrilling journey? " The Danties : Rise of Antik Krallik " ......Give it a try ! This new writer is incredible...he needs some support.. Thank you guys !

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Vainglory0
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(Skip the first 10 sentences or so if you don't want to die of brain damage. I was on some white powder my homie got me for me.) Do you wanna see ppl get fooked over? Do you want an MC so fooked in the mind, he would abandon the entire with no second thoughts to accomplish what he wants to achieve? Do you want to see him lose everything and fail? Do you want to see him bound and helpless as he losses a part of him forever? Do you want to see an already broken man, break further? Well, then you're a fooking sadist. Seek help... is what any sane person would tell you. But I am not a sane person. Far from that, really. So here is what I have for you: Go read the fooking novel. For those who are not specifically looking for any of the things I mentioned above and are not as fooked in the mind as me and the rest, congratulations are in order. Coz you're fooking normal. Now that by itself is sad in it's own way but let's not go there. Instead... Here's an ordinary review for you: Writing quality: No glaring flaws here. The starting chapters are a bit rough with somewhat big paras, but it improves after the first 10 or so chapters. Anyways, proper punctuations, no over use of conjunctions, paragraphs of the right length. What more do you need? Stability of Updates: Updated once or twice a day without skipping any days. Instant 5 star. Story development: Stable development. The early chapters are a bit fast but he was a fooking kid anyways. The pace becomes normal after the time skip. Character Design: Well the story is still in the introductory phase so there is not much to say about it rn. But from what we have seen till now, some interesting characters have been introduced. The first is obviously the MC. If how I started this review didn't make it clear, I will say it again. The MC is broken asl. Both with his powers and his mind. Although, even if he has cheat-like powers, all the enemies he will face will be on a far higher level than him so you don't have to worry about it. From what little we see of his past we come to know just how messed up his life is. Although reincarnating and having a family alleviated some of his pain, keeping it that way would make it boring for us readers wouldn't it? Hehe.. hehehe.... Next is Sylv-whatever, she is your classic elven princess type shii so I will skip her. Next is Sera-something, who despite having only been introduced for not more than a couple of chapter, is quite the interesting character already(saying anymore would be a spoiler so I will skip over this). Next is ofc, the hero whose name I already forgot, who Lucas can wipe the floor with coz the hero started training late or whatever. EX.CU.SES. Despite me badmouthing a few of the characters, there are several good characters in the novel. The perfect examples would be the MC's family and the ones who work for them... that being I said, I forgot their names too... World Background: Well, the basic design is the same old with humans and elves and other races against the demons. If anything is new its that the demons are in another world unlike in other novels and mythical races that used to exist in the past play a huge role. Overall I would say this is a novel with good potential and blah blah blah. Finally, I would like to mention that I don't remember all the character names not because I am high, but because I am not good with names... just saying.

Hardy1j
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Do I even need to say anything? Just go read it!! The novel is good. Very Good. (*Ahem* Wouldn't write a review coz it doesn't even have 100 chaps, alas, the author forced me to) Writing Quality: Smooth flow It is pretty good compared to the average writing on this app. You can just read it as it flows smoothly. Though, definitely not the best, but one of the finest I've read recently. Story Development: The story is pretty fast paced with next to none fillers unlike other novels and that's what makes this novel very likeable by me. It is developed properly by Crypth, not like anything goes. Seems well-planned as everything falls into place with more chapters. Character Design: Honestly, they might seem cliche at the beginning, but trust me, they are not(at least some of them aren't). You can expect some weird characters and funny ones too. The story has more of a darker tone, so do expect all types of characters as it seems to encompass snippets from real life itself. Updates: They are more or less regular even though I got betrayed by Crypth from 100 free chapters to locking early. Still, currently he is busy with exams and is still trying to meet updates, so he will be regular for sure. World background: The latest chapter is the best one I have read regarding world backgrounds in my most recent reads. It felt fresh even if somewhat cliche. But one thing I can say with certainty, it is definitely pretty good. A lot, however, remains unexplored. Romance: A lot remains unanswered but one thing is certain. The FL is freaking amazing, and a monster like Lucas. You're gonna enjoy it!! 101% Conclusion: What are you waiting for?? Go read it!! Ah yes, I am an author too, so go read my books too if you get bored of his novel xD. Okay, for real now. This book is really good, just go read it, you will love it if you like MCs who don't hate the idea of becoming hated by entire humanity for their loved ones. Reader's discretion: There is an annoying Hero who is like the typical cliche you can guess, so just beware if you hate such characters.

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